IELTS Writing Task 1 Actual Test 16/06/2025 Dạng Diagram

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Đề bài

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Phân tích biểu đồ

1. Analyzing the Visual Data (5 minutes)

• Break Down Structure: Identify the diagram’s stages (e.g., mining, crushing, gasification, cleaning, power generation) and components (e.g., coal, gas, electricity, waste heat, cooling towers).
• Identify Contrasts: Note differences such as the shift from coal to gas, electricity output versus waste heat, and the role of cooling in the process.
• Select Impactful Data: Prioritize major stages (e.g., gasification, power plant) and outputs (e.g., electricity distribution, waste heat dissipation) for detailed comparison.

2. Planning the Response (3 minutes)

• Paraphrase Prompt: Rephrase “shows how one type of coal is used” to “depicts the sequential process of electricity generation from a particular coal type.”
• Summarize Trends: Highlight the linear progression and key outputs (e.g., gas conversion, electricity and waste heat production).
• Structure Paragraphs: Plan an overview paragraph for general trends and a detailed paragraph for stage-specific descriptions.

3. Writing the Response (10 minutes)

• Introduction (2 minutes): Paraphrase the prompt and outline the diagram’s focus.
• Overview (3 minutes): Summarize main stages and key features without specific data.
• Detailed Paragraphs (5 minutes): Elaborate on stages with comparisons (e.g., efficiency of gas conversion vs. heat loss).

4. Reviewing and Editing (2 minutes)

• Verify clarity, grammar, word count (150–200 words), and logical progression.
• Ensure all key stages and comparisons are accurately represented.

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 actual test 16/06/2025 8.0+

The diagram depicts the process of producing electricity from a particular type of coal. The process encompasses several interconnected stages, starting with extraction and culminating in power distribution, with a notable shift from solid coal to gas and the emission of waste heat as a key feature.

The cycle begins at a mine where coal is extracted and subsequently crushed. The crushed coal is then transported to a gasifier, where it is transformed into gas through the application of intense heat. This initial phase significantly alters the material’s form, while cooling and cleaning processes produce considerable waste heat as a byproduct, highlighting an early energy loss in the system.

In the subsequent stages, the purified gas is channeled to a power plant, which converts it into electricity with efficiency. This electricity is then distributed to homes and industries, whereas the residual waste heat is discharged into the atmosphere. The final step effectively completes the process, demonstrating the balance between energy production and waste management.

(164 words- by teacher Tony G, former IELTS examiner)

Phân tích tiêu chí chấm điểm bài mẫu band 8+

• Task Achievement (TA): Fully meets the task by providing a clear overview and detailed description of all stages, with effective comparisons (e.g., waste heat vs. electricity) and relevant selection of features.
• Lexical Resource (LR): Utilizes advanced vocabulary (depicts, interconnected) and precise process terms, enhancing the academic tone with appropriate collocations.
• Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA): Demonstrates a wide range of complex structures (where, while) with flawless accuracy and varied sentence types.
• Coherence and Cohesion (CC): Maintains a logical flow with strong linking (e.g., “subsequently,” “whereas”), ensuring a cohesive and well-organized response.

Giải thích từ vựng và ngữ pháp nâng cao sử dụng trong bài mẫu band 8.0+

1. Where it is transformed: Relative clause adds specificity

E.g., The factory, where production occurs, is modern.

2. Which converts it into electricity: Relative clause with object.

E.g., The device, which powers the system, is reliable.

3. While cooling and cleaning processes produce: Adverbial clause shows simultaneous action.

E.g., While it rained, we stayed inside.

4. Depicts: Visually represents: Miêu tả, khắc họa.

E.g., The map depicts the region accurately.

5. Interconnected: Linked stages: Có sự liên kết, kết nối với nhau.

E.g., Interconnected systems ensure smooth operation.

6. Culminating: Reaching the end: Kết thúc bằng.

E.g., The event concluded with a speech.

7. Notable: Worthy of attention: Đáng chú ý, nổi bật.

E.g., Notable changes were observed.

8. Significantly: Indicates importance: Đáng kể, một cách quan trọng.

E.g., Significantly, the policy changed outcomes.

9. Effectively: Successfully: Hiệu quả, thành công.

E.g., The plan was effectively implemented.

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing actual test 16/06/2025 band 6.0

The diagram illustrates the method of producing electricity from a specific type of coal.

The process includes several steps, starting with mining and finishing with electricity supply. A key change occurs when coal turns into gas, and waste heat is also generated during the process.

The process starts with coal being mined and then crushed into smaller pieces. After that, the crushed coal is taken to a gasifier where it is heated to become gas. Next, the gas is cooled and cleaned, which produces some waste heat as a side effect. Following this, the cleaned gas is sent to a power plant where it is used to generate electricity. Finally, the electricity is distributed to homes and businesses, while the waste heat is released into the air. The steps show a clear sequence from raw material to energy output, with waste heat being a consistent byproduct throughout.

(147 words)

Phân tích tiêu chí chấm điểm bài mẫu band 6.0

• Task Achievement (TA): Provides a general summary of the process and mentions key stages, but lacks detailed comparisons (e.g., efficiency differences) and depth, aligning with a Band 6 expectation of basic coverage.
• Lexical Resource (LR): Uses straightforward vocabulary (e.g., “method,” “generate”) with some repetition, lacking the range or precision needed for higher bands.
• Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA): Employs simple sentences with occasional minor errors (e.g., “is taken” could be more varied), showing limited complexity but acceptable accuracy.
• Coherence and Cohesion (CC): Follows a logical order with basic linking words (e.g., “after that,” “finally”), though transitions are rudimentary, reflecting a Band 6 level of organization.

Phân tích so sánh giữa bài mẫu band  8.0+ và band 6.0

Tạm kết

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