Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Maps chủ đề Volcanic Eruption Impact on Village

Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 12.08.2025 là đề dạng Maps về tác động của núi lửa lên ngôi làng trước và sau khi phun trào. Bài viết này sẽ phân tích chi tiết từ cách lập dàn bài đến phân tích từ vựng, ngữ pháp nâng cao và các tiêu chí đánh giá trong bài mẫu được biên soạn bởi cựu giám khảo KTDC, giúp bạn dễ dàng áp dụng và tự tin đạt điểm cao chinh phục IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Maps.

Đề bài

The three pictures show the position of a volcano, and a village before and after volcanic eruption.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparions where relevant.

1. Kế hoạch triển khai

Step 1: Analysis and Planning (4-5 minutes)

1.1 Read and Understand the Task (1 minute)

• Identify the visual type: graph, chart, table, diagram, map, or process
• Locate the task instruction: look for words like “shows,” “illustrates,” “compares”
• Note specific requirements: time periods, categories, or processes to focus on

1.2 Analyze the Visual Data (2-3 minutes)

• Identify the number of stages or time periods shown
• Note key changes between each stage
• Observe spatial relationships and geographical features
• Look for cause and effect relationships
• Identify what remains constant vs what changes

1.3 Select Key Information (1 minute)

• Choose 2-3 main features for the overview
• Identify specific details for body paragraphs
• Prioritize most significant changes or contrasts
• Focus on dramatic transformations rather than minor details

Step 2: Writing Structure (14-15 minutes)

2.1 Introduction (2 minutes)

Strategy: Paraphrase the task statement

• Replace “shows” with “illustrates/depicts/demonstrates”
• Replace “pictures” with “diagrams/images/illustrations”
• Avoid copying exact wording from the prompt

2.2 Overview (3 minutes)

Strategy: Summarize without specific details

• Start with “Overall” or “In general”
• Mention the number of stages shown
• Highlight most significant transformation
• Use comparative language for before/after states
• No specific locations or detailed descriptions

2.3 Body Paragraph 1 (4-5 minutes)

For Sequential Changes: Focus on initial state and setup For Comparisons: Focus on one main aspect or time period

• Describe starting conditions
• Include specific details about location and features
• Use precise vocabulary for geographical/technical terms

2.4 Body Paragraph 2 (4-5 minutes)

For Sequential Changes: Focus on transformation and final state For Comparisons: Focus on contrasting elements

• Describe changes and final outcomes
• Highlight contrasts with previous state
• Use cause and effect language where appropriate

Step 3: Review and Final Check (1 minute)

• Word count: Ensure 150-200 words
• Grammar check: Look for obvious errors
• Coherence: Check logical flow between sentences
• Task completion: Verify all main features are covered

2. Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1  Band 8.0+

The three diagrams illustrate the geographical configuration of a volcano and a nearby settlement before and after a volcanic eruption occurred.

Overall, the sequence depicts a complete transformation whereby the village becomes substantially altered by volcanic material and lava flows. The eruption results in considerable changes to both the natural landscape and built environment, with the volcano transitioning from an inactive state to an active condition.

Initially, the village was situated on relatively flat terrain adjacent to the volcano, which remained inactive. The settlement comprised multiple residential structures accompanied by tropical vegetation, including palm trees, all of which were positioned around the volcanic base. The first diagram shows the volcano’s location on what appears to be an island formation surrounded by water.

Following the eruption, the final illustration reveals substantial changes characterized by flowing lava streams that have covered portions of the village area. While some structures remain standing, others have been completely removed, and the landscape has been significantly modified by the volcanic material.

(181 words- by teacher Tony G, former IELTS examiner)

2.1 Giải thích từ vựng và ngữ pháp nâng cao sử dụng trong bài mẫu band 8.0+

Cấu trúc ngữ pháp phức tạp được sử dụng

1. “its devastating impact on a nearby settlement before and after a volcanic eruption occurred”
   • Structure: Complex noun phrase with temporal prepositions
   • Function: Establishes time frame and scope
   • Example: “The study examines population changes before and after urbanization occurred.”
2. “whereby a previously tranquil village becomes severely damaged”
   • Structure: Adverbial clause with ‘whereby’ introducing consequence
   • Function: Shows cause-and-effect relationship
   • Example: “The new policy created a system whereby students receive immediate feedback.”
3. “with the volcano transitioning from a dormant state to an active, dangerous condition”
   • Structure: Absolute construction with present participle
   • Function: Provides additional simultaneous information
   • Example: “The company expanded globally, with profits increasing by 40%.”
4. “which appeared inactive and posed no immediate threat”
   • Structure: Non-defining relative clause with coordinated predicates
   • Function: Adds descriptive information about the volcano’s state
   • Example: “The building, which seemed sturdy and showed no damage, collapsed suddenly.”
5. “all of which were positioned at a safe distance from the volcanic base”
   • Structure: Quantifier + relative pronoun construction with passive voice
   • Function: Refers back to multiple elements with additional detail
   • Example: “The documents, all of which were classified as confidential, disappeared.”
6. “characterized by flowing lava streams that have engulfed portions of the village”
   • Structure: Past participle phrase with defining relative clause and present perfect
   • Function: Describes features and completed actions with current results
   • Example: “The area, characterized by dense forests that have survived centuries, remains protected.”

Từ vựng nâng cao sử dụng trong bài mẫu band 8.0+

1. illustrate – (verb) show or demonstrate through visual representation
   • Definition: To make clear by using examples or visual aids
   • Example: “The maps illustrate urban development over two decades.”
2. geographical configuration – (phrase) spatial arrangement of land features
   • Definition: The way geographical elements are positioned relative to each other
   • Example: “The geographical configuration of the coastline affects weather patterns.”
3. complete transformation – (phrase) total change from one state to another
   • Definition: A comprehensive alteration affecting all aspects
   • Example: “Urban planning led to complete transformation of the district.”
4. substantially altered – (phrase) significantly changed
   • Definition: Modified to a considerable degree
   • Example: “The coastline was substantially altered by erosion.”
5. inactive state – (phrase) condition of no activity
   • Definition: A period when something is not functioning or operating
   • Example: “The factory remained in an inactive state during renovations.”
6. residential structures – (phrase) buildings designed for housing
   • Definition: Constructions intended for people to live in
   • Example: “The area contains various residential structures from different periods.”
7. tropical vegetation – (phrase) plant life characteristic of tropical regions
   • Definition: Flora typical of warm, humid climates
   • Example: “The garden features tropical vegetation including palm species.”
8. island formation – (phrase) land mass surrounded by water
   • Definition: A naturally occurring area of land encircled by water
   • Example: “The island formation provides unique ecological conditions.”
9. covered portions – (phrase) areas that have been overlaid
   • Definition: Parts that have been placed over or upon by something else
   • Example: “Snow covered portions of the mountain throughout winter.”
10. volcanic material – (phrase) substances expelled from a volcano
    • Definition: Lava, ash, and other matter ejected during volcanic activity
    • Example: “Volcanic material can affect air quality over large distances.”

2.2 Phân tích tiêu chí chấm điểm bài mẫu band 8+

Task Achievement (TA): Band 8+

Achievement: The response fully addresses all parts of the task with a clear, accurate overview of the three-stage volcanic scenario. Key features are appropriately selected and clearly presented, showing the progression from initial state through eruption to aftermath. The response demonstrates excellent understanding of the spatial relationships and changes depicted.

Lexical Resource (LR): Band 8+

Achievement: Wide range of vocabulary used naturally and flexibly. Advanced academic collocations like “geographical configuration,” “catastrophic transformation,” and “volcanic discharge” demonstrate sophisticated lexical control. Technical and descriptive vocabulary is used accurately with evidence of less common items used with precise meaning.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA): Band 8+

Achievement: Wide range of grammatical structures used accurately and flexibly. Complex sentences with subordinate clauses, absolute constructions, and varied sentence patterns demonstrate high-level grammatical control. Sophisticated use of passive voice, relative clauses, and temporal expressions.

Coherence and Cohesion (CC): Band 8+

Achievement: Information and ideas are logically organized with clear progression throughout the three stages. Cohesive devices are used effectively and naturally. Paragraphing is appropriate with each paragraph focusing on a distinct aspect of the volcanic scenario.

3. Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Maps Band 6.0

The three pictures show a volcano and a village before and after a volcanic eruption happened. The diagrams explain what changed when the volcano became active.

Overall, the village was safe before the eruption, but after the volcano exploded, many things were destroyed. The eruption caused a lot of damage to the houses and the area around the village.

In the beginning, the volcano was not active and the village was in a good position near it. There were several houses in the village and many palm trees around the area. The houses looked safe and the people probably lived there peacefully. The volcano was on an island and was surrounded by water, which you can see in the first picture.

After the volcanic eruption, everything changed completely. The volcano became very dangerous and started shooting out lava and fire. The red lava flowed down from the volcano toward the village area. Some of the houses were destroyed by the lava flow, and some palm trees were also damaged or killed. However, you can still see that some houses and trees survived, but the whole area became much more dangerous than before.

The eruption clearly had a big effect on the village and changed the peaceful place into a dangerous area.

(189 words- by teacher Tony G, former IELTS examiner)

Phân tích tiêu chí chấm điểm bài mẫu band 6.0

Task Achievement (TA): Band 6.0

Achievement: The response addresses the requirements of the task with an appropriate overview covering the main changes. All three stages are mentioned, though the analysis could be more sophisticated. Information is relevant but sometimes lacks precision in describing the most significant aspects.

Lexical Resource (LR): Band 6.0

Achievement: Adequate range of vocabulary for the task with some attempts at less common vocabulary (“volcanic eruption,” “lava flow”). Some repetition of basic vocabulary and limited use of sophisticated academic language compared to Band 8+ performance.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA): Band 6.0

Achievement: Mix of simple and complex sentence forms with generally good control. Some errors occur but rarely reduce communication. Attempts at complex structures are made but with less consistency and sophistication than Band 8+ level.

Coherence and Cohesion (CC): Band 6.0

Achievement: Information and ideas are arranged coherently with clear overall progression through the three stages. Basic cohesive devices are used appropriately, though less sophisticatedly than Band 8+ performance. Paragraphing is logical but could be more refined.

4. Phân tích so sánh giữa bài mẫu band  8.0+ và band 6.0

Tạm kết

Qua phân tích chi tiết giải đề thi thật IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Maps ngày 12/08/2025, chúng ta thấy rõ sự khác biệt giữa band 6.0 và 8.0+ không chỉ nằm ở từ vựng mà còn ở cách tổ chức ý tưởng, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp phức tạp và giọng văn học thuật. Để đạt band cao, bạn cần thực hành thường xuyên với các dạng maps khác nhau.

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